Hi Whitney Great start. Do you intend to record a voice over for every question? If so you must answer the 4 questions separately and post them separately so that it's really clear to the moderator (and Dan and I) which video resonds to which question. You need to put in shots from your video to explain how other videos influenced you - you've put in shots from existing real music videos but without the shots from your video alongside it doesn't really show us anything. Equally you must put in screen shots from your digipak and advertisement alongside the ones that influenced you. One of the comments from your audience feedback mentions something about narrative - what is the narrative in the video? you've not mentioned that before and so will need acknowledge the presence of a narrative piece in your video at the start. Rebecca
Hi Whitney
ReplyDeleteGreat start. Do you intend to record a voice over for every question? If so you must answer the 4 questions separately and post them separately so that it's really clear to the moderator (and Dan and I) which video resonds to which question.
You need to put in shots from your video to explain how other videos influenced you - you've put in shots from existing real music videos but without the shots from your video alongside it doesn't really show us anything. Equally you must put in screen shots from your digipak and advertisement alongside the ones that influenced you.
One of the comments from your audience feedback mentions something about narrative - what is the narrative in the video? you've not mentioned that before and so will need acknowledge the presence of a narrative piece in your video at the start.
Rebecca