Analysis of one sequence from the Rough Cut that I could change

To improve the footage of the Rough Cut, I would film a different variety of shots to use during the chorus. This would alternatively liven it up by making it visually interesting for viewers. It sets the pace in time to the song as the chorus is heard as a climax in comparison to the verse and bridge. 

The close-up shot of Imogen's lips was badly framed and this can be seen in the footage where you can see her positioning herself.